Change "the the moves" to "the moves", "division drop the price" to "division dropped the price", and "but asside from" to "but aside from" and this article may pass as a third grader's report. Geez, is English reporting in this country going in the crapper...
There shouldn't be a comma after "Blu-ray would win," either, but I think that's fourth grade grammar... maybe in another year we'll see some improvements? :-)
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mnemonicj @ Jul 29th 2008 10:51AM
Change "the the moves" to "the moves", "division drop the price" to "division dropped the price", and "but asside from" to "but aside from" and this article may pass as a third grader's report. Geez, is English reporting in this country going in the crapper...
Ben @ Jul 29th 2008 10:52AM
Fixed, thanks.
Hakon @ Jul 29th 2008 7:03PM
There shouldn't be a comma after "Blu-ray would win," either, but I think that's fourth grade grammar... maybe in another year we'll see some improvements? :-)